Yet Another First Day
It's been one year since Charlie quit his last job, but he's ready to go out and try again. Surely things will go simply and easily without any complications, right?
Yet Another First Day is a short visual novel created for the NovemBEAR gamejam in RPGMaker VX Ace. It is a fairly short experience mostly to show what I'm capable of making. It is surely flawed, but I'm proud to have made it myself, and hope to grow and improve for making future projects.
Only tested with keyboard controls and on Windows, though certain controllers should work as well. No mouse support.
Trigger Warning for mentions of self harm.
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Development log
- Web Version55 days ago
- January Bug Fixes88 days ago
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很好的作品，如果能看到更多接下来的故事，就更棒了
This story was short, but it was nicely written. I was also a bit sad that the story ended so soon, as I wanted to know more of the characters.
SPOILERS
The title is very fitting, as this really is a day in the life of a character, hahaha.I liked the way the story was written, as the character clearly has a very strong case of anxiety, showing how he doubted everything and was overthinking everything as well.
Now, I played the version without the bug-fixes, but as update mentions the story stays the same, I must say I was hoping to know more on why the main character has been so anxious in the past couple of years.
Maybe it is mentioned and I didn’t notice, (it can happen to me) but this leads to the only real issue I have which is how the story is more people talking about past events, instead of seeing them happen.
The use of the mini-map in the back was an interesting way to handle backgrounds and show the space the characters were at. Extra points for creativity.
Finally I want to mention that the character art is very cute!
Overall I liked reading this.
An enjoyable read! I haven't seen many VNs made in RPGmaker, so that was interesting to experience. The character designs are all lovely, and I enjoyed their personalities as well! Uncle Vern is def my favorite! The background having a diorama of the scene is such a clever idea, and I loved when it matched with the monologue, like with the black tile in the shop, really nice attention to detail!
The only thing that was a little strange is that the game didn't have an ending, like a fade to black, or exit to title screen or something like that. It just stops giving any more dialogue, which was a little odd.
Other than that though, I liked it a lot, would love to see what else you work on in the future! <3
As it seems, there is a new furry visual novel jam taking place. In fact, its submission phase has just started! I guess I am going back to my role as a voracious fvn jam reader and rater.
This will be my first subject of review. Get ready!
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Ow. new game >_<