This story was short, but it was nicely written. I was also a bit sad that the story ended so soon, as I wanted to know more of the characters.
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The title is very fitting, as this really is a day in the life of a character, hahaha.
I liked the way the story was written, as the character clearly has a very strong case of anxiety, showing how he doubted everything and was overthinking everything as well.
Now, I played the version without the bug-fixes, but as update mentions the story stays the same, I must say I was hoping to know more on why the main character has been so anxious in the past couple of years.
Maybe it is mentioned and I didn’t notice, (it can happen to me) but this leads to the only real issue I have which is how the story is more people talking about past events, instead of seeing them happen.
The use of the mini-map in the back was an interesting way to handle backgrounds and show the space the characters were at. Extra points for creativity.
Finally I want to mention that the character art is very cute!
An enjoyable read! I haven't seen many VNs made in RPGmaker, so that was interesting to experience. The character designs are all lovely, and I enjoyed their personalities as well! Uncle Vern is def my favorite! The background having a diorama of the scene is such a clever idea, and I loved when it matched with the monologue, like with the black tile in the shop, really nice attention to detail!
The only thing that was a little strange is that the game didn't have an ending, like a fade to black, or exit to title screen or something like that. It just stops giving any more dialogue, which was a little odd.
Other than that though, I liked it a lot, would love to see what else you work on in the future! <3
As it seems, there is a new furry visual novel jam taking place. In fact, its submission phase has just started! I guess I am going back to my role as a voracious fvn jam reader and rater.
This will be my first subject of review. Get ready!
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很好的作品，如果能看到更多接下来的故事，就更棒了
This story was short, but it was nicely written. I was also a bit sad that the story ended so soon, as I wanted to know more of the characters.
SPOILERS
The title is very fitting, as this really is a day in the life of a character, hahaha.I liked the way the story was written, as the character clearly has a very strong case of anxiety, showing how he doubted everything and was overthinking everything as well.
Now, I played the version without the bug-fixes, but as update mentions the story stays the same, I must say I was hoping to know more on why the main character has been so anxious in the past couple of years.
Maybe it is mentioned and I didn’t notice, (it can happen to me) but this leads to the only real issue I have which is how the story is more people talking about past events, instead of seeing them happen.
The use of the mini-map in the back was an interesting way to handle backgrounds and show the space the characters were at. Extra points for creativity.
Finally I want to mention that the character art is very cute!
Overall I liked reading this.
An enjoyable read! I haven't seen many VNs made in RPGmaker, so that was interesting to experience. The character designs are all lovely, and I enjoyed their personalities as well! Uncle Vern is def my favorite! The background having a diorama of the scene is such a clever idea, and I loved when it matched with the monologue, like with the black tile in the shop, really nice attention to detail!
The only thing that was a little strange is that the game didn't have an ending, like a fade to black, or exit to title screen or something like that. It just stops giving any more dialogue, which was a little odd.
Other than that though, I liked it a lot, would love to see what else you work on in the future! <3
As it seems, there is a new furry visual novel jam taking place. In fact, its submission phase has just started! I guess I am going back to my role as a voracious fvn jam reader and rater.
This will be my first subject of review. Get ready!
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Ow. new game >_<